Score: 6

"Could be better, could be worse."

submission: StarCraft: Reconnoiter

date: May 9, 2006

I've never heard of "StarCraft" before, but I didn't feel lost in your animation, which was good. The violence was pretty decent, not gratuitous, and the plot wasn't just an excuse for violence which is always nice. The weakest point in your movie, I'd say, is your voices. I can tell they were all done by one person (you, right?). You need to have more variety, better acting in your voices. They all sounded the same. I'd frequently fade out during longer lines. Your story-telling and characterization is very nice. I'm curious to see what happens next in your story.

Score: 7

"Story could have used a little bit of work."

submission: story of a loser

date: May 2, 2006

I a huge fan of your artistry. Watching Paladin develop into a full-fledged masterpiece is amazing. That said, I loved the art in this story, but your story-telling skills could use a bit more work. This one has a good beginning and a good middle, but it could use a better ending. A more conclusive ending -- does the Loser have any hope? Why doesn't he conform? Why do they conform? Why do they hate him for not conforming? Why doesn't he fight back? Why aren't there any other misfits like him?

Score: 10

"I love this!"

submission: Fox News:Hannity & Colmes

date: April 28, 2006

I loved your George W. Bush TV show and I love this! I cannot find a single mistake in it. Good writing, good sound, good acting, excellently animated. And best of all, it's funny because you just know it's true.